Your cover, content and double are all showing signs that they could progress to proficient. To improve: 1) Change the font size of the article on the double. 2) Proof read your article and make relevant corrections. 3) Add more stories to your content page. 4) Re-think your cover layout (font size and font layout).
Overall you practical work demonstrates proficiency in the following areas: * Producing material appropriate to target audience * Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout * Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes * Accurately using language and register * Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task * Appropriately integrating illustration and text * Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set * Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing
Your cover, content and double are all showing signs that they could progress to proficient. To improve:
ReplyDelete1) Change the font size of the article on the double.
2) Proof read your article and make relevant corrections.
3) Add more stories to your content page.
4) Re-think your cover layout (font size and font layout).
Also, on the double change the quote font choice as it doesn't fit your genre conventions.
ReplyDeleteOverall you practical work demonstrates proficiency in the following areas:
ReplyDelete* Producing material appropriate to target audience
* Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout
* Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes
* Accurately using language and register
* Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task
* Appropriately integrating illustration and text
* Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set
* Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing